ext_58876 ([identity profile] tinkerbell99.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] swatkat 2006-12-02 03:51 pm (UTC)

I think LJ ate my comment the first time, so I'm trying again:

The pale pink shirt clings to her body, showing off those curves, and if she turns this way, he bets he'll get an eyeful 'cause Shannon takes slutty to a new level altogether.

She's the most beautiful thing he's ever seen.


That fits Shannon in Boone's eyes just perfectly. Everything he knows he shouldn't want, but he does anyway. And the mention of the checkbook is a great little drop-in showing that Boone's usual method of dealing with Shannon isn't going to work here.

I just love Shannon/Boone - they're so deliciously angsty - and you captured all of that here. I really enjoyed this - thanks!

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