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Current Music: Chale Jaise Hawaien - Main Hoon Na

Things not to write in a sex scene

"...her warm mouth was dripping with saliva..."

Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!

"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."

What is she, Skeletor?

I'm not making these up.

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