Things *not* to write in a sex scene
Nov. 8th, 2004 09:11 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
swatkat"...her warm mouth was dripping with saliva..."
Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!
"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."
What is she, Skeletor?
I'm not making these up.
Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!
"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."
What is she, Skeletor?
I'm not making these up.
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Date: 2004-11-08 05:21 pm (UTC)One of our previous senators looks like Skeletor
Date: 2004-11-09 07:35 am (UTC)http://bioguide.congress.gov/scripts/biodisplay.pl?index=G000333
Senator Skeletor
Oh my...
Date: 2004-11-09 01:38 pm (UTC)Swatkat
That's about right.
Date: 2004-11-09 06:46 pm (UTC)*Urk*
Date: 2004-11-08 05:54 pm (UTC)Hee
Date: 2004-11-09 01:37 pm (UTC)Swatkat
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Date: 2004-11-08 06:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-11-08 10:00 pm (UTC)That is all, thank you.
Saliva as erotica???
Date: 2004-11-09 12:44 am (UTC)thanks for a laugh
Heh
Date: 2004-11-09 01:36 pm (UTC)Swatkat
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Date: 2004-11-09 06:32 am (UTC)I imagine someone doffing their cranium like a tophat, and saying "Top of the mornin' to ye!"
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Date: 2004-11-09 01:35 pm (UTC)Bwahahaha!
I found 'skull' in yet another story. I mean, what is it with some authors? Skull isn't sexy, people. *headdesk*
Swatkat
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Date: 2004-11-09 04:20 pm (UTC)skulls -- no
Date: 2004-11-09 06:47 pm (UTC)Bald is pretty
Date: 2004-11-10 04:58 am (UTC)Swatkat
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Date: 2004-11-09 12:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-11-09 01:33 pm (UTC)Swatkat
really?
Date: 2004-11-09 06:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-06 01:55 pm (UTC)& :-P
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Date: 2004-12-07 04:31 pm (UTC)Swatkat