Things *not* to write in a sex scene
Nov. 8th, 2004 09:11 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
swatkat"...her warm mouth was dripping with saliva..."
Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!
"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."
What is she, Skeletor?
I'm not making these up.
Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!
"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."
What is she, Skeletor?
I'm not making these up.
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Saliva as erotica???
Date: 2004-11-09 12:44 am (UTC)thanks for a laugh
Heh
Date: 2004-11-09 01:36 pm (UTC)Swatkat