Things *not* to write in a sex scene

[swatkat]

"...her warm mouth was dripping with saliva..."

Oh, way to go with the dog imagery!

"...he tipped her skull towards himself..."

What is she, Skeletor?

I'm not making these up.

Comments

skulls -- no

[sk56.livejournal.com]

but bald seems to be a big yes for many people, so I suppose it's skull + skin = yes.

Bald is pretty

[swatkat24.livejournal.com]

but only if the person is someone like Lex Luthor (Smallville). But I could do without the descriptions of the sun shining on his head.

Swatkat